A good start you have shown depth and detail in your production planning I like the story board which displays a good range of camera shots
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Could you explore some different camera angles such as high low and canted this would add to the representation of your characters and also demonstrate tension and chaos particularly with the stab scene. Could you also name your characters and put your outline idea in a three part structure beginning middle and end. Abbreviate camera shots.
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